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How do I rephrase this overly long descriptive sentence?
I'm trying to describe the landscape of a dystopian city but I'm getting tripped up.

"The city is rather a hellish sight: the endless, monotonous rows of buildings are lit up by industrial powerhouses spewing flames into a murky night sky."

Any help would be appreciated, thanks

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The City, endless rows of monotonous buildings back lit by the flames of industry spewing acrid murk into the starless night sky... a glimpse into hell itself.

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