Is a fictional story set in another world harder to get into?
I am writing a fictional story (could be considered science-fiction) about slightly primitive people. It is set in cold environment where a day cycle takes a whole year. Inspired by Antarctica, with the weather being more of Canada. The story also includes a cave network with groundwater heated by volcanic activity, and natural crystals that glow a soft blue light.
Most of it (other than glowing crystal) could happen in a natural environment such as Earth. Although perhaps would be more understandable in an environment such as a make believe world. My only concern in setting the story in a make believe world is that it seems to me, unless done very well, the story would feel unrealistic and be harder to get absorbed in.
Would this be more believable set on Earth or in another world?
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A story set in another world is harder to get into as the differences between what we (the readers) experience compared to what happens to people on the other world.
The other answers are incorrect that it has to do with how good of a writer you are. What matters is how well the story you are writing connects to the reader. Plenty of fiction (mostly sci-fi) occur off earth, and plenty of those don't talk about or even mention earth. But the people, the emotions, the experiences are similar in fashion, though the environment is different.
Think of it like this: if you're writing about the Amazon river but have never been to it (like most people), it'll be a foreign environment. That doesn't mean that now it's harder to connect to...unless everything remains foreign. Because we can't connect to what we don't understand, and we don't understand what we don't know or see. So deliver something for the reader to experience, with familiarity in some fashion, and slowly expand from there.
The short answer is no, having a slightly fantastic setting won't make your story harder to fall into, unless you do things that break your readers' willing suspension of disbelief.
Rather than write a bunch of stuff about suspension of disbelief, I'll just direct you to this question from a few years back:
What breaks suspension of disbelief?
My advice is explain what you need to about your setting so readers understand what's going on, but leave your setting as the backdrop. Don't spend too many words on it. People who choose to read science fiction stories know what they're getting into; they just need to know the rules of the fictional world.
I'm no professional writer but it depends on your target group for a young adult audience I would think to set it on earth despite some of the unrealistic parts
I don't know much of other audiences but I think the main thing is the target audience
ultimately it depends how how good your writing is! Some are able to very fluently create alternative worlds and places and have a natural ability to describe the nuances that matter.
So really it comes down to your skill as a writer.
But then why do you need to specifically state where it is? Describe your world as a place that will have an earth feel to it, but with occasional details thrown in that will make the reader wonder...
I would say that the first task is understanding your own ability to create that world, so maybe write some short pieces and develop your skill in that area. Get some feedback and go from there...
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